a lot of the logos are contained they look to confined. on page three the strongest is the logo with the cross but agin it looks inclosed may be you can separate the type from the cross and also the icons a bit
I feel the same way as the previous comment, they feel compact, they feel tight. There's too much going. I feel that the strongest one is the #8 and #21; on the first page #8, it's very simple and to the point. It just needs hierarchy, because right now what i see first are the olympic rings. I really like #21 alot, it feels almost done, i would just play more with different reds or with some gradient effects. Another contender to be a good logo could be #17 on page 3, but i don't know how i feel about having the objects inside the rings, i feel that you shouldn't have anything inside the Olympic brand.
I think that logo 21 works the best out of your set. I think that others have readability issues when small. Since you have so many icons, they're just too small and confined. With regards to #21 the icons tend to look better and read much better. However, I think you will want to try out new methods of incorporating the type, as it tends to blend into the cross.
Another idea may be to just go with one or maybe two of the icons and work with it that way. The two icons on top of the cross in #21 look interesting and unique.
a lot of the logos are contained they look to confined. on page three the strongest is the logo with the cross but agin it looks inclosed may be you can separate the type from the cross and also the icons a bit
ReplyDeleteI feel the same way as the previous comment, they feel compact, they feel tight. There's too much going. I feel that the strongest one is the #8 and #21; on the first page #8, it's very simple and to the point. It just needs hierarchy, because right now what i see first are the olympic rings. I really like #21 alot, it feels almost done, i would just play more with different reds or with some gradient effects. Another contender to be a good logo could be #17 on page 3, but i don't know how i feel about having the objects inside the rings, i feel that you shouldn't have anything inside the Olympic brand.
ReplyDeleteI think that logo 21 works the best out of your set. I think that others have readability issues when small. Since you have so many icons, they're just too small and confined. With regards to #21 the icons tend to look better and read much better. However, I think you will want to try out new methods of incorporating the type, as it tends to blend into the cross.
ReplyDeleteAnother idea may be to just go with one or maybe two of the icons and work with it that way. The two icons on top of the cross in #21 look interesting and unique.